19 May, 2007

Innocent Death [Touching]

A Death of an Innocent Person [Touching Poem]

Message: Don't Dr!nk & Drive


I went to a party Mom,
I remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mom,
So I drank soda instead.

I really felt proud inside, Mom,
The way you said I would.
I didn't drink and drive, Mom,
Even though the others said I should.

I know I did the right thing, Mom,
I know you are always right.
Now the party is finally ending, Mom,
As everyone is driving out of sight.

As I got into my car, Mom,
I knew I'd get home in one piece.
Because of the way you raised me,
So responsible and sweet.

I started to drive away, Mom,
But as I pulled out into the road,
The other car didn't see me, Mom,
And hit me like a load.

As I lay there on the pavement, Mom,
I hear the policeman say,
"The other guy is drunk," Mom,
And now I'm the one who will pay.

I'm lying here dying, Mom ....
I wish you'd get here soon.
How could this happen to me, Mom?
My life just burst like a balloon.

There is blood all around me, Mom,
And most of it is mine.
I hear the medic say, Mom,
I'll die in a short time.

I just wanted to tell you, Mom,
I swear I didn't drink.
It was the others, Mom.
The others didn't think.

He was probably at the same party as I.
The only difference is, he drank
And I will die.

Why do people drink, Mom?
It can ruin your whole life.
I'm feeling sharp pains now.
Pains just like a knife.

The guy who hit me is walking, Mom,
And I don't think it's fair.
I'm lying here dying
And all he can do is stare.

Tell my brother not to cry, Mom.
Tell Daddy to be brave.
And when I go to heaven, Mom,
Put " Daddy's Girl" on my grave.

Someone should have told him, Mom,
Not to drink and drive.
If only they had told him, Mom,
I would still be alive.

My breath is getting shorter, Mom.
I'm becoming very scared.
Please don't cry for me, Mom.
When I needed you, you were always there.

I have one last question, Mom.
Before I say good bye.
I didn't drink and drive,
So why am I the one to die?



  2. This is really a gud message to all youth...Friends beware of these thins obey ur parents...

  3. The moral of this poem is "Mom's message will be always for our better life" Also there is one more moral that "all mom's must say it to their childrens not to drink". I hope all my friends follow these elderly words. This poem is extremely touching..

    -Rajiv.K Bangalore

  4. dear friends this poem is very gre8 for all youth life..it shown our reality and value of the life
    i wanna say thanx for gr8 gr8 gre8
    and marvals heart touching poem..

    raj,NIFA- Sriganganagar(rajasthan)

  5. the poem is really touching. it really imply to the young youth who think their life is only theirs but the truth is someone is waiting for right when u leave ur house.

  6. Excellant Heart rendering poem with a clear message from the kid to everybody either younger or old that obeying parents and avoiding bad habits like drinking etc. always put you on a way better for your journey of life.

  7. superb ! this poem is really touch my heart. sometimes young generation not doing, wht their parents say and others should to pay for their mistakes(habits) like this boy.

  8. Really touching poem, it is also true that for the fault of others somtimes you have to pay.........

  9. very touching ! the best poem I have read in recent times with such a message.

  10. Really very touching poem!this is a lesson to everyone who drank n drive and let d other peoples to suffer, so take a lesson from d poem. 'DO NOT MIX DRINKING N DRIVING'

  11. hey its really a heart touching poem

    Do try to follow the theme of the Poem

  12. ohhh god.. this poem is realy heart touching.....why he died even he followed his mom...why god.....why...this is really not fair at all...i realy feeling that the person who got died is realy unlucky.....as i m ....

  13. Hi..
    It is very touching....
    Be proud of this, hope all the youth will listen to their moms like you...
    then there will be no drink & drive accidents..

    All The Best

  14. Their are so many things to learn from this poem, No matter how straiaght we are walking we have to take turn on the curves to move ahead, Life is nothing but only the present second.

  15. Its really a heart touching poem. Everyday all around the world there are so many people including youngsters who die due to accidents caused by alcohol. Everyday a mother and a father somewhere around the world loses her child in accident. Everyday a child becomes an orphan due to accident. I think its high time for everyone to realise the lesson of this poem. Dont drink and drive and, if possible, forbid your friends also.

  16. oh GOD u give life to others why u have taken the innocent life.When mom is with him why u have hurt him.I really feel ur heaven need good poeple so u love to take away the lives of innocent poeple
    We have faith on u,pls dont give pain 2 any mom

  17. i dont kno y u had 2 die.Av cried all the tears i culd 4 u. Always kno that its Jesus who allows some things to happen the way they do. Bye! I know up in heaven ur smiling at yo bro who hs tried his best 2 wipe the tears off his face.Bt in his heart they may stil be there, who knows only God knows.U will always remain innocent 2 us.Im sorry.


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